This oneshot was written about six months ago, or maybe seven (July 2007, I think) and it's not necessarily about Metallica, so feel free to use your imagination.
I'm kinda proud of it though it's nothing special...
I hope you like it...



Rain



‚Fucking rain’
A gloomy August afternoon, thunderstorm coming.
The rain is pouring down on me, growing heavier each second, it’s soaking me, my clothes are dripping wet, but somehow I don’t care.
I’m on my way home; I had a walk through the city, no target, though.
I enjoyed it.
And now I’m looking forward to seeing him again.
A weird feeling takes hold of me.
It’s like I’m…scared of something.
What is this feeling?
Where’s the sense?
Do I have to be scared of something?
Is this a foreboding?
Or just some kind of imagination?
I don’t know.
And I’m not sure if I WANT to know.
Yet I start to fasten my pace, suddenly I have to get home as fast as I can.
Why?
The weight of my clothes is dragging me down and I feel as if I’m falling into a deep, bottomless hole.
Where does this feeling come from?
Why do I feel it?
What’s wrong with me?
I arrive at home, the wind’s surrounding me, blowing hard, it’s whirling around my hair and I hurry to get inside.
Silence.
Alarming silence?
I call his name.
No response.
Again, I call his name.
My voice is getting a bit louder, mixed with arising fear, though I don’t seem to have a reason to panic.
The thunderstorm has reached it’s climax, it’s raging.
I walk into the living room; the water’s dripping down from me onto the wooden floor.
And there he is.
Pale.
He doesn’t notice me.
I see something cold, it’s flashing up.
What is this?
The next I notice…
Something’s dripping down from his arm, forming a spot beneath his feet.
Red.
Blood.

And the sun is shining through the windows.

You are so talented.I really like it. :heart:

Wow, that was so sudden and dramatic. It sounds like something Poe or Lovecraft would've written to some degree :( Very visual, I could see everything. Poor guy :(

Well done! I really liked it and I could imagine it all...keep on writing :D

Thank you very much :heart: :heart: :heart:

You're very talented writer :horns2 That was really, really good... Sad though :(
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Thank you :blush:

Very powerful writing, very enjoyable :)

Thank you very much :)

amazing stuff!! so strong!!! I'm becoming a serious fan of you!!!! :heart:

Woah, thank you :blush: :)

I agree with the others, very powerful and great and all. :)

It's strange how sometimes you get the feeling that something bad has happened... Or that you'd need to be somewhere... This some kind of sense of things gone wrong...

Thank you very much :) :heart: