My very first post so please go easy on me! :wacko:


The year is 1989 and Metallica are touring in Lars' home country Denmark, but Lars has a problem...


Lars tossed and turned in his bed, shivering with the cold breeze coming in through his jammed open window
"I'll never get to sleep with this FOCKING window", he thought to himself.
He sat upright and got out of his bed, hunched over and shivering in his underwear.
He made his way over to his bedroom door, opened it, and looked up and down the filthy motel hallway.
James' room was on one side of him and Jason's on the other, but Lars made his way to end of the hallway, to Kirk's room.

Kirk was lying on his bed staring into space with a beer in his hand. He noticed that he still had his dirty stage clothes on and pulled off his shirt and began undoing his jeans when he heard a gentle knock on his door.
He sighed and got up from his bed, walked over and opened the door to find Lars standing there in his underwear with his arms wrapped around himself.
"Hey Kirk"
"Oh! Hey Lars.."

Lars just stood there, shivering, not saying anything.
"So, do you need something or are we just gonna stand here all night?"
"Hammster, I need a favor, Lars said. The window in my room is jammed open and the snow keeps blowing in and it's fockin' 20 degrees under in there and I can't get to sleep and--"
"And?" said Kirk, trying to stop Lars babbling all night
"And, well... can I stay in here tonight?"

"It can't be THAT bad" said Kirk walking down the hallway with Lars following behind.
Kirk opened the door to Lars' room and a chilling breeze hit his face.
"Fuck, man - that IS bad", said Kirk, shivering.
"So can I?", Lars pleaded.
Kirk sighed, "FINE Lars, c'mon"
They walked back down to Kirk's again.

Kirk went in and looked up and down the hallway before yanking Lars into his room by the hand.
"Ouch! What the hell was that for"
"Lars, what do you think James would do if he saw you coming into my room?"
"Good point"
Lars walked over to the bed and got in, shivering.
Kirk got in on the other side "You stay to your side and I'll stay to mine, ok?"
"Ok"

Kirk remembered that he still had his jeans on and slid out of the bed and began to pull them off.
He blushed as he saw Lars watching him from the corner of his eye.
He got back into the bed, this time moving a little closer to Lars.

"How the hell did you stay warm when you used to live here, if the weather's always like this?" Kirk said, still shivering, with his back facing Lars.
"It just kinda came naturally, y'know, just kinda staying close to eachother... exchanging body heat."

The moment Lars said that, Kirk's body tensed up as he felt Lars move across the bed and wrap his arms around Kirk's waist from behind.
Kirk took a deep breath and turned around to face Lars and pulled him into a tight embrace against his body.

He stayed there for a moment, with his arms tightly wrapped around Lars' body, his cheek pressing against Lars' cheek.

Lars ran his hands up the back of Kirk's neck and through his thick, curly hair.
Kirk pulled Lars towards him and started kissing him hard, flicking his tongue through his lips.
Kirk's head fell back as Lars started to kiss him gently on the neck, Kirk closed his eyes tight.

Lars laid himself onto Kirk's body, pressing himself against him.
"You don't know how long I've wanted this" Lars whispered lustfully into Kirk's ear.
Lars could hear Kirk breathing heavily onto his neck.

Kirk slid his hand down Lars' underpants and started massaging him gently. Lars couldn't help letting out a moan as Kirk moved his hand faster and faster.
Lars' head fell back, his chest heaving up and down as he gasped for breath.

As Kirk withdrew his hand Lars moved his lips over Kirk's torso, kissing his body, moving lower and lower, until he got down to Kirk's underwear.

He looked up at Kirk, smiled, and then pulled them down to Kirk's knees.
He took Kirk into his mouth and started to work him harder and harder, faster and faster.
Kirk closed his eyes tight, bit his lip, and started moving his fingers through Lars' sweaty hair.

Lars could feel Kirk's body extremely tensing up as they both knew what was coming.
Kirk's body jerked as he came, and he moaned and almost ripped the hair from Lars' scalp.
Lars could hear Kirk's rapid, gasping breath - his eyes still tightly closed.

Lars spat out, and moved up beside Kirk again and gazed at him sleepily.
Kirk wiped Lars' mouth with his thumb and kissed him softly before falling asleep against him.

Lars stayed awake a little longer than Kirk, caressing him on his sweaty cheek and watching him sleep peacefully before he drifted off too...

The next morning, Lars woke up with his head against Kirk's chest.
He could feel Kirk's warm arms around him, running his fingers through Lars' hair.
Lars smiled to himself and closed his eyes again.
He didn't regret what had happened that night.
And Kirk didn't either.


THE END :wink

Normally I don't go for slash, but that was hot :drool , and so funny at the same time :lol: Why don't you go and introduce yourself? :)

Hey I enjoyed that. It was innocent -but not at the same time. I do realise that that makes nearly no sense - but it's what it made me feel. It also let me have a chuckle, and I really did enjoy it!

I also really enjoyed reading this and it was quite hot.

good job :)

Hey thanks guys! Yeah, it pretty much makes no sense at all.. but, hey - thats the kinda stuff that pops into my head when I'm supposed to studying for exams! :nanner5:

yeah tell me about it... :D I don't know your fiction is kinda the same with the one from the home page of metallichicks(you know up where it writes Fan Fiction) Don't be mad at me pls... :blush:

Yeah, it kinda is.. but, oh well
I only wrote it out of boredom (and because I'm strange :P )

see that boredom can be inspiring? :lol:
great story though; not quite original idea but it's well written! (and very hot!) :biggrin

I normally don't read slash, but this is written really sweet..

i liked this (:

I think you are very good writer and as i said i liked this much. (and lars and kirk together oh yes!). Nice idea, and very cute one.

Focking hell, Niamh, why didn't you tell me you wrote this!!! :lol: :wink

Wow, this is so ace!!! I thought this was so hot, you know!!!

:rockdevil:

OMG!!!! this was...*faints* LOVED IT!!! oh that description!!!! ACE!!!!! so damn hot!!!!! :drool :drool :drool

keep writing more!!!!

:tu: :horns2

Wasn't she a great writer? :heart:

Ah, man I feel awfull now letting a bad comment around here,
Niamh...we miss you :(

That was a great story :) I so want to be Kirk in it :)

and me-the third one in it :lol:
great story, really...

:) :heart: